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Darryl Fowler

This scene masterclass was an excellent course. I loved every minute of it. It helped me with scene design and construction and moved my story forward as instructed.

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Darryl Fowler

This scene masterclass was an excellent course. I loved every minute of it. It helped me with scene design and construction and moved my story forward as instructed.

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YIOTA FLOROU

One of the best and most helpful writing courses I've ever taken! Thank you so much, I gained a new perspective!
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YIOTA FLOROU

One of the best and most helpful writing courses I've ever taken! Thank you so much, I gained a new perspective!
Kathi Jenkins

Kathi Jenkins

I have never learned subtext in this detailed, helpful way. There were several realizations in each section. I would like to rewatch this in a year and see what I pick up then. It feels jam-packed with knowledge.
Kathi Jenkins

Kathi Jenkins

I have never learned subtext in this detailed, helpful way. There were several realizations in each section. I would like to rewatch this in a year and see what I pick up then. It feels jam-packed with knowledge.
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Rajat Jana

My chapters and scenes were not really up to my liking and the cause became evident after taking the course. Now I am much more confident with my drafts and scenes, knowing they will hook the readers.
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Rajat Jana

My chapters and scenes were not really up to my liking and the cause became evident after taking the course. Now I am much more confident with my drafts and scenes, knowing they will hook the readers.
Heather Reich

Heather Reich

This course has definitely helped me sharpen the scenes in my current revision process.

Heather Reich

Heather Reich

This course has definitely helped me sharpen the scenes in my current revision process.

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Karen Olive

I received more help and information about writing in this scene crafting course than I had even anticipated. I will be following Jordan Rosenfeld as a teacher and advisor in other resources she has available. Thank you, for your wealth of information and teaching skills.
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Karen Olive

I received more help and information about writing in this scene crafting course than I had even anticipated. I will be following Jordan Rosenfeld as a teacher and advisor in other resources she has available. Thank you, for your wealth of information and teaching skills.
Ytinn Liao

Ytinn Liao

My problem is lack of emotion and the slow pacing killer. How this course deconstructs the scene elements really helps me to improve writing. many thanks.
Ytinn Liao

Ytinn Liao

My problem is lack of emotion and the slow pacing killer. How this course deconstructs the scene elements really helps me to improve writing. many thanks.
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kara

My biggest challenge before taking this course was knowing when to start and continue with breaking up my story outline into scenes. This course helped me overcome the challenge with the thorough and complete information that describes the complete elements of scene writing. The course is filled with a plethora of exercises to get your scene-crafting practice going.

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kara

My biggest challenge before taking this course was knowing when to start and continue with breaking up my story outline into scenes. This course helped me overcome the challenge with the thorough and complete information that describes the complete elements of scene writing. The course is filled with a plethora of exercises to get your scene-crafting practice going.

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Talia Haviv

I really appreciated the section on subtext. It's something I've never thought about but found I was already doing instinctively, and I'm excited to learn new ways of implementing subtext in a more consistent and purposeful way.
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Talia Haviv

I really appreciated the section on subtext. It's something I've never thought about but found I was already doing instinctively, and I'm excited to learn new ways of implementing subtext in a more consistent and purposeful way.
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Susan Coffin

This is such a GREAT course, and I feel like I have learned so much! The best part is that I have the workbook and I can also access it again anytime I want to.
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Susan Coffin

This is such a GREAT course, and I feel like I have learned so much! The best part is that I have the workbook and I can also access it again anytime I want to.
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Jay D

I write in multiple genres. I had a problem with scene setting and this is exactly what I learned in this course. I have a new perspective on the different aspects of scene building now. I loved this class. The writing exercises helped me work through the instruction by implementing the lessons in real time.

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Jay D

I write in multiple genres. I had a problem with scene setting and this is exactly what I learned in this course. I have a new perspective on the different aspects of scene building now. I loved this class. The writing exercises helped me work through the instruction by implementing the lessons in real time.

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Shelina G

I love a practical course and this one, was jam packed. I didn't expect it to be so hands-on and it really helped solidify the information being presented. Thank you for including this in the course options. It's well worth the time.
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Shelina G

I love a practical course and this one, was jam packed. I didn't expect it to be so hands-on and it really helped solidify the information being presented. Thank you for including this in the course options. It's well worth the time.
Linda Todd

Linda Todd

I've studied scenes multiple times in the past few years, but never in such a comprehensive and easy-to-understand manner. The examples shared in the course, along with the exercises, helped solidify each element of a scene and how they all connect. The course and the workbook will be a valuable resource for me to return to when struggling to write a scene.
Linda Todd

Linda Todd

I've studied scenes multiple times in the past few years, but never in such a comprehensive and easy-to-understand manner. The examples shared in the course, along with the exercises, helped solidify each element of a scene and how they all connect. The course and the workbook will be a valuable resource for me to return to when struggling to write a scene.
Jodi Norman

Jodi Norman

It gave me an understanding of how a scene ought to shine in a story. I think Jordan mentioned that they are like putting beads on a wire. That makes me think of jewels or pearls on a necklace. Probably pearls considering what the oyster goes through to make one—something I can relate as I write.
Jodi Norman

Jodi Norman

It gave me an understanding of how a scene ought to shine in a story. I think Jordan mentioned that they are like putting beads on a wire. That makes me think of jewels or pearls on a necklace. Probably pearls considering what the oyster goes through to make one—something I can relate as I write.
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Kathleen Kelly

Excellent course presented with helpful guidelines. Breakdowns of what makes a good scene were easy to understand and gave a great checklist for revising. Highly recommend.
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Kathleen Kelly

Excellent course presented with helpful guidelines. Breakdowns of what makes a good scene were easy to understand and gave a great checklist for revising. Highly recommend.
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Maureen Piet

I have learned so much from this course. I'm sure I will come back to it again and again to keep on honing my skills, diving deeper into the rich content. thank you very much Jordan.
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Maureen Piet

I have learned so much from this course. I'm sure I will come back to it again and again to keep on honing my skills, diving deeper into the rich content. thank you very much Jordan.
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Sable

This was a fantastic course! It helped synthesize the info in your books and got a few things to finally click for me. Now I can see why certain scenes just feel off and how to fix them! Thanks so much!
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Sable

This was a fantastic course! It helped synthesize the info in your books and got a few things to finally click for me. Now I can see why certain scenes just feel off and how to fix them! Thanks so much!
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Capili Jiron

I learnt so much from Jordan, she is an incredible teacher. I loved how she explained everything in detailed steps. I adsorbed a lot of great tips and took many notes. The scene revision process will be helpful for revising my drafts. Thank you.
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Capili Jiron

I learnt so much from Jordan, she is an incredible teacher. I loved how she explained everything in detailed steps. I adsorbed a lot of great tips and took many notes. The scene revision process will be helpful for revising my drafts. Thank you.
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Megan Harris

I was aiming for general improvement and I'm confident this course has helped. I'll definitely revisit many of the lectures as I work on revising my novel.

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Megan Harris

I was aiming for general improvement and I'm confident this course has helped. I'll definitely revisit many of the lectures as I work on revising my novel.

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Carlos E. Mendoza

Excellent! I feel I have to keep practicing, but I have the knowledge to write great scenes. Thank Jordan, I´ll be reviewing this course many times.

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Carlos E. Mendoza

Excellent! I feel I have to keep practicing, but I have the knowledge to write great scenes. Thank Jordan, I´ll be reviewing this course many times.

Maureen Piet

Maureen Piet

Yes, a breakthrough. I already know a lot of what is said in the course, it is just so helpful to have it in one place, to have it structured and divided up in easy to understand categories. Also, I now know where I can make a huge improvement on my own writing, putting the content on character cues into practice and through honing my skill of subtext. I think the main part though is that is showed me once more how much I love to write, and entertain a reader 🥰

Maureen Piet

Maureen Piet

Yes, a breakthrough. I already know a lot of what is said in the course, it is just so helpful to have it in one place, to have it structured and divided up in easy to understand categories. Also, I now know where I can make a huge improvement on my own writing, putting the content on character cues into practice and through honing my skill of subtext. I think the main part though is that is showed me once more how much I love to write, and entertain a reader 🥰

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Jindřich Vejvoda

This lecture has taught me many new tools that I can use for my scene writing. It helped me fill some gaps in my knowledge of scenes. I feel more confident in scene writing now. Thank you very much.
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Jindřich Vejvoda

This lecture has taught me many new tools that I can use for my scene writing. It helped me fill some gaps in my knowledge of scenes. I feel more confident in scene writing now. Thank you very much.
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Caitlin Binder-Markey

My biggest challenge before taking this course was how to make my scenes come alive and move the story forward. Jordan did an amazing job breaking down all the components in easy to understand ways. I enjoyed the exercises to practice the skills and the templates will be really helpful when I work on my own novel. I felt this course was helpful, encouraging, and easily applicable. I'll be coming back whenever I feel stuck. Thanks!

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Caitlin Binder-Markey

My biggest challenge before taking this course was how to make my scenes come alive and move the story forward. Jordan did an amazing job breaking down all the components in easy to understand ways. I enjoyed the exercises to practice the skills and the templates will be really helpful when I work on my own novel. I felt this course was helpful, encouraging, and easily applicable. I'll be coming back whenever I feel stuck. Thanks!

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Vivian Figueredo

I’ve been struggling with scenes for a long time and have read a lot of books and taken a lot of courses on the topic, but I think with Jordan’s help, something finally clicked!
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Vivian Figueredo

I’ve been struggling with scenes for a long time and have read a lot of books and taken a lot of courses on the topic, but I think with Jordan’s help, something finally clicked!
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Thomas Nolan

This course helped me revise and improve my novel.

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Thomas Nolan

This course helped me revise and improve my novel.

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Nolan Kulbiski

Absolutely, this course was a game-changer for me! Before starting, I felt stuck in a rut with my skills, unsure of how to progress. My goal was to gain a deeper understanding of the subject and perhaps even master certain aspects that had always seemed out of reach. Not only did the course content exceed my expectations, but the interactive assignments pushed me to apply what I learned in real-world scenarios.
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Nolan Kulbiski

Absolutely, this course was a game-changer for me! Before starting, I felt stuck in a rut with my skills, unsure of how to progress. My goal was to gain a deeper understanding of the subject and perhaps even master certain aspects that had always seemed out of reach. Not only did the course content exceed my expectations, but the interactive assignments pushed me to apply what I learned in real-world scenarios.
Watson Davis

Watson Davis

I've modified how I approach writing scenes because of this course. I've created a new scene checklist template in Scrivener that I fill out when I'm planning a scene or revising a scene. It's helped me to focus more. I realized during the exercises that I had not been including all of the steps that Jordan was suggesting and adding those steps (explicitly stating the goal, going in with an emotion and subtext in mind, thinking in terms of complications to the goal) improved the scenes I was writing and revising.
Watson Davis

Watson Davis

I've modified how I approach writing scenes because of this course. I've created a new scene checklist template in Scrivener that I fill out when I'm planning a scene or revising a scene. It's helped me to focus more. I realized during the exercises that I had not been including all of the steps that Jordan was suggesting and adding those steps (explicitly stating the goal, going in with an emotion and subtext in mind, thinking in terms of complications to the goal) improved the scenes I was writing and revising.
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Diane Schmidt

I love the course! There's so much good stuff in there. I think basic scene structure was something I needed to pay more attention to. Listening to Jordan talk about ways to use emotions, pacing, and subtext sparked so many ideas for my current WIP. I am generally a little resistant about doing exercises, because I want to work on my WIP. But, I did Jordan's and glad I did. They were fun and valuable. Thanks to WMA for bringing Jordan into our writing lives.

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Diane Schmidt

I love the course! There's so much good stuff in there. I think basic scene structure was something I needed to pay more attention to. Listening to Jordan talk about ways to use emotions, pacing, and subtext sparked so many ideas for my current WIP. I am generally a little resistant about doing exercises, because I want to work on my WIP. But, I did Jordan's and glad I did. They were fun and valuable. Thanks to WMA for bringing Jordan into our writing lives.

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Penelope Lapsley

This course helped me achieve a goal on crafting better scenes, implementing imagery into my settings and has boosted my confidence level to a 100%. I now feel confident in completing my novel.
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Penelope Lapsley

This course helped me achieve a goal on crafting better scenes, implementing imagery into my settings and has boosted my confidence level to a 100%. I now feel confident in completing my novel.
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John Castaneda

This course was amazing! Great insight, easy to follow instruction, and practical information that I am so excited to use in my current work. As usual, Jordan excelled! We are so fortunate to have her course in our writing academy!

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John Castaneda

This course was amazing! Great insight, easy to follow instruction, and practical information that I am so excited to use in my current work. As usual, Jordan excelled! We are so fortunate to have her course in our writing academy!